What you think of this?

Adam, your poem is a mix of melodrama, hyperbole, and grammar errors. I have written extensively in the past, provided innumerable instances of selfless assistance in this, your quest to develop poetic talents. I have been repaid by insolence and negligence. In truth, you should read, closely and thoughtfully, a minimum of 1,000 master poems and spend a year, minimum, studying the craft of poetry before you post another. It really isn't fair to expect people of knowledge to glorify your efforts.